In Writing, we did our own character brainstorm.
Here is my own character brainstorm.
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
In Writing, we did our own character brainstorm.
Here is my own character brainstorm.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Stella, what a great character brainstorm you have written. I like all the information you have included about Staggy's likes and dislikes. Was this character relating to a book you have read?
ReplyDeleteNo. Its my mum and my ideas.
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Kia Ora Stella, this is a great brainstorm about Staggy. I like that you have created your own character and that you have shared what they like and dislike. Remember that when you write your description tomorrow to expand your sentences and add detail.
ReplyDeleteOk. thank you for your comment
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