In writing we did a character description burger plan with our Dojo monsters.
here is my character description burger plan.
What will you write on your character description burger plan?
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In writing we did a character description burger plan with our Dojo monsters.
here is my character description burger plan.
What will you write on your character description burger plan?
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Kia Ora Stella, I love all the description you have put into your burger plan. Puggle sounds like a cool monster. Do you have any of Puggle's likes or dislikes? Perhaps the one about not like vegetables???
ReplyDeleteAhiahi Marie Stella, you have lots of detail in your plan, which will make your writing really interesting. Are there any similarities between you and puggles?
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