In writing, we chose a monster from the Dojo monsters.
We did a brainstorm of that monster and gave a name.
here is my brainstorm.
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
In writing, we chose a monster from the Dojo monsters.
We did a brainstorm of that monster and gave a name.
here is my brainstorm.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia Ora Stella, I like the name puggle, it is a cute name to match the dojo. I think it is great that you have included some adjectives to describe the body parts. Next time consider the size, shape, colour and texture of your dojo, this might help you to add more ideas to your work.
ReplyDeleteOk I will try to.Thank you for your comment.
DeleteHi Stella, I love your dojo Puggle. I like how you described his face being covered in grape flavoured Ice-cream. Puggle looks friendly to me do you think he is friendly?
ReplyDeleteYes.Thank you
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