At writing we are learning about the characters in the movie Inside out.
We had to choose a emotion and come up with our own character.
I chose Proudness and we had to write a journal with our character.
here is what I did.
Dear Journal,
Today Riley got her Math test result.
She got an F.
She was so sad that she cried all day.
The other guys and I were sad too.
Then I had an idea!
I tried to tell her that it´s OK because she tried her best.
We told her our messages.
Then in her mind she could start to listen to our messages.
Suddenly, she stopped crying.
Then she thought, ¨yes it´s OK cause I tried my best!¨
She was happy after that.
We were even happier than her!
By Proudness
what emotion will you choose?
Hi Stella,
ReplyDeleteI like your diary entry by Proudness and the message that they had about helping out their friend Riley and helping them to be ok because they did their best. I think I would choose the emotion Grateful because it is important to feel happy about the things we have. Well done with your punctuation. Correct grammar would be "The other guys and I were sad too." If you take out "the others" you will know whether to put I or Me because the sentence should make sense. That is "I was sad" not "Me was sad"
Mrs Hamilton
Thank you I will write the correct grammer down.
DeleteKia Ora Stella, wow! I am so impressed with your writing. You have demonstrated a growth mindset by being positive and remembering that it is important to try your best. This is a great reason to be proud. If I choose an emotion I think I would choose gratitude as it is something I working on demonstrating.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
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